Privet readers,
In room 9 we have been learning to write narrative stories, the purpose of a narrative story is to entertain the reader. First we had to plan our story, then write it. We had to add language features and describing words.
My favourite sentence is "Rest in peace Altair".
One thing I could improve on is using the numbers words instead of symbols.
If you have any feedback consider commenting, Have a good day byee.
WOW Casper,what an interesting story.Your words made me re-read your work several times.It was such a busy story that I had too-people were fighting while others were trying to talk!Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Mrs Cassidy. Thank you Mrs Cassidy I tried my best on this story. Thank you for looking at my blog have a good day.
DeleteKia Ora Casper,
ReplyDeleteI like your story it is very describing what I like the most in your story is the story painting an image in my mind.My favourite sentence in your story is "Then he used explosives" because in minecraft I really like to use tnt.Have a great day!
Hello Casper i like that you use lots of describing word I like the part where is says Two assassins hid in dirty bushy hay bale. I hope you have a great day bye.
ReplyDeleteHello Nijesh, Thank you for looking at my blog.
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