G'day readers,
Today's post is a narrative organiser where we break all the parts of the story heres mine.
If you have any feedback consider commenting. bye.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
G'day readers,
Today's post is a narrative organiser where we break all the parts of the story heres mine.
If you have any feedback consider commenting. bye.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
G'day Casper! I like how concise your narrative organiser is. I would suggest just checking your sentences are complete with punctuation and that they make sense before publishing. Thanks for sharing your learning with us!
ReplyDeletePrivet Whaea Miki, Thank you for your feedback.
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