Hello readers,
In room 9 we have been doing a descriptive descriptive writing of a tree house or a UFO. I chose tree house here is my work.
One rainy stormy day Joel and Ellie were walking through a forest. It was risky because there is a tree house controlled by the fireflies who are a strong militia. Joel and Ellie went in it anyway, Joel killed a firefly with his shiv and hid him. ‘’Joel there's one up the stairs’’ Joel instead took him hostage so other fireflies wouldn’t shoot him. ‘’Give us ammo and everything will be fine’’ The fireflies didn't give them any so Joel had to kill them ‘’Ellie be careful’’ ‘’ i’ll be fine’’. Joel distracted them with a brick and threw a nail bomb at them, ‘’Is that all of them no there's one more hiding. Joel found him and threw him off the edge of the tree house, Joel and Ellie took over the tree house and lived there. The end.
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Hello Casper.
ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to checking out your work but the words are shooting across the page.
Can you fix it so it reads downwards like a book?.Thank you
Have a great holiday.